I say kid because he is one of about 3 on campus who looks 13 years old. I am not exaggerating. At least now I know his name.
I say tried because he got the rhyme scheme alright, but the meter was hackneyed.
*gold star*
I admire effort. I think it was pretty cool that he went out on the limb that he did, going full-on formal poetry like that.
Still...
it wasn't a sonnet.
Awww, was he a cute enough little kid to get away with it?
ReplyDeleteWas it a good poem, other than the meter?
(Although I prefer a good meter to a good rhyme scheme, and I think maybe you do, also, so "good" would have to be relative.)
XD he is presh, but noooooo. No excuses.
ReplyDeleteI liked it well enough.
(I prefer BOTH. but yes, meter is more important to me than rhyme, as a rule...:P)